The Biomechanics of Plants

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The Biomechanics of Plants

Postby Don Schaeffer » Sat Jul 18, 2015 4:24 pm

The flowers are uneven.
Only from afar do they
resemble machines.
From up very close
every carpel and stamen
oddly twist
and pieces of pollen
fail to cling to
unformed ledges.
.
Blue-eyed
brown-eyed, green-eyed
gaze at you
from unpturned and downturned
brows. The mouths twist and
lips overlap and part.
Don

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