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Oozes

Postby Don Schaeffer » Sun Aug 23, 2015 11:24 am

Bankrupcy due to
laziness and age
comes with such a
stabbing into the
balloon of a heart.
Big, empty heart,
nothing but
an inflated tent,
like a caterpillar's
airy body, home of the worm.
The air
of the bankrupt heart,
like the empty
abdomen of an insect
never bursts out
only oozes.
Don

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