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Saturday in March

Postby Don Schaeffer » Sat Mar 26, 2016 9:56 am

The morning
is a well-trained chambermaid,
silent. There is no
narration, The squirrel
monopolizes the birdfeeder.
His tail is unfocussed,
nature saying she
doesn't know. The grackle
waits on a branch above,
never impatient.
The flowers on the table
refract the filtered
sunlight from this angle.
There is no sense,
no story, except the
clatter of forks.
Don

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