Only the Blind Can Watch

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Don Schaeffer
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Only the Blind Can Watch

Postby Don Schaeffer » Sat Mar 11, 2017 2:46 pm

Only those who
live can watch
and they are
biased from the start.
We are such
a strange and arbitrary shape.
And I am not alone.
Who could have
imagined it in the
time before eyes?
Why this shape?
Why here?
Don

dancuddy
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Re: Only the Blind Can Watch

Postby dancuddy » Sat Mar 25, 2017 11:56 am

This poem---to me---is like one of those Rorschach ink spots. It suggests much without being specific.

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Re: Only the Blind Can Watch

Postby Don Schaeffer » Sat Mar 25, 2017 1:14 pm

Thanks Dan
Don


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