Science Says Reincarnation's Not a Punishment

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Science Says Reincarnation's Not a Punishment

Postby Don Schaeffer » Wed May 03, 2017 9:52 am

If you get
turned into an animal
next time around, you
don't have to worry.
You won't have tv and
you won't drive, but
you'll have family
and friends and fresh air.
Your life may be shorter
but time will be different.
Don

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Re: Science Says Reincarnation's Not a Punishment

Postby hawkseye » Thu May 04, 2017 9:25 pm

You won't have tv and
you won't drive, but
you'll have family


family - not always a certainty in this human lifetime

I wonder, though, whether the dynamics of the animal world mimic the dynamics of human world -- at least here and there -- the benefits, the fights, the power struggles and hierarchy...

Thought provoking poem -- the title led me here ...

- judy

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Re: Science Says Reincarnation's Not a Punishment

Postby Don Schaeffer » Thu May 04, 2017 10:26 pm

Thanks Judy. I think they do--not mimic us but evolve along the same outlines--outlines of this particular world.
Don


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