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Don Schaeffer
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Building Self Confidence

Postby Don Schaeffer » Sun Jun 22, 2014 1:38 pm

We are wild
tactical creatures, eyes
flickering around
a perilous world. Words
and fingers.
Words and fingers.
We are safe
only when we are
predicting.
When we
guess the future
then we are safe.

For those
whose life is not even,
I know how
tired you are,
how hard it is to rest.
Things waggle
day by day,
uncommonly. I know
how you
spend your days
dodging, with darts
fired at your legs.

You are
wild tactical creatures.
I see your eyes narrow.
Don

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