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XL--25 The World Outside My Window

Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2017 12:08 pm
by WayneS
Allen made this look so easy....


The World Outside My Window

Sun
squintingly bright
burns through morning fog
it was there
all along


Air
so still
leaves float
stright down


Squirrel
tightrope dances
on bare tree branch

Re: XL--25 The World Outside My Window

Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2017 12:19 pm
by hawkseye
It's true, Wayne - Allen's poem this morning leaves the impression of depth with ease

Still, from these I am connected visually, and my sense of touch is engaged -- bright sun's finally appearing is enhanced / that leaf, not often one sees this / and those squirrels -- balance by tail!

-judy

Re: XL--25 The World Outside My Window

Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2017 2:09 pm
by Bill_Back
Enjoyed the read.

Bill

Re: XL--25 The World Outside My Window

Posted: Fri Dec 01, 2017 8:23 am
by allenitz
very good. my favorite, the last. sharp image often seen. love to watch the squirrels.

allen