Combustion

A forum to explore the form of Cinquain by making a continuous chain using the last line of the previous cinquain. Jus hit reply and copy the last line of the previous cinquain.

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Combustion

Postby sonoranpoet » Wed Oct 19, 2011 2:47 pm

a flame
burns with result
until attention peaks
sometimes roars like a lioness
or chokes

This last line is a good example where the start of the next cinq can be altered....

you don't have to use 'or'

choking
choker
I choke
they choke
it choked

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Re: Combustion

Postby 'Ilima Stern » Wed Oct 19, 2011 3:17 pm

choking
scares the choker
people around respond
swiftly, decisively; again
breathing


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Re: Combustion

Postby sonoranpoet » Wed Oct 26, 2011 10:10 am

breathing
Palo Verde
exhales all his oxygen
green branches dance and wave at me
I hum


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