7 - angry

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7 - angry

Postby hawkseye » Wed Oct 19, 2011 7:24 pm

LAST line from Ilima -- breathing

angry

breathing
buys time, quells storms
raging inside, slows words
woven with daggers, friendship’s death
halted


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Re: 7 - angry

Postby sonoranpoet » Fri Oct 21, 2011 9:33 am

let's just continue from here...I don't think we have to number...feel free to add a title to your cinq if you want but it's optional...

here is how we did it at PenShells (this was page 30 of the train
http://penshells.yuku.com/topic/1313/Pickles-won-t-cinq?page=30

halted
a heart smitten
fatted by new attention
moment stopped then started quickly
hastened

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Re: 7 - angry

Postby 'Ilima Stern » Sun Oct 23, 2011 10:46 pm

hastened
for naught, was fraught
time was, I thought, pressing
ceremony postponed, fiddle
breathing

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Re: 7 - angry

Postby sonoranpoet » Wed Oct 26, 2011 10:20 am

I think I'll lock the other 'topics' so this ends up as our main thread for now...and when I have time I'll post those cinqs in their order and attribute them to the correct author. I know I screwed the beginning of this up rather royally!

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and exalted
homage paid martinis
nose candy snorted the dream
shatters

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Re: 7 - angry

Postby sonoranpoet » Fri Oct 28, 2011 12:30 pm

shattered
glass then a wink
hooligans play their pranks
on a Hallowed eve fullfillment
misused

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Re: 7 - angry

Postby 'Ilima Stern » Sun Oct 30, 2011 4:19 am

last line from Sue...misused

misused
misbegotten
bemused, besmirched, beaten
believe me when I say, be kind
cherish


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