Cinquain

A forum to explore the form of Cinquain by making a continuous chain using the last line of the previous cinquain. Jus hit reply and copy the last line of the previous cinquain.

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Helen V
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Cinquain

Postby Helen V » Sat Oct 29, 2011 9:54 am

Hi, I'll give it a try. Should we number these? Do we have to do one a day?
Helen


Married
near thirty years
Love brought us together,
our thoughts intertwined, were alike
now gone

OHHH, I SEE WHERE I REALLY GOOFED, TRIED TO DELETE THE POST AND IT WOULDN'T WORK HERE.SORRY, EVERYONE.
sMILES,
HELEN

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'Ilima Stern
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Re: Cinquain

Postby 'Ilima Stern » Sun Oct 30, 2011 4:09 am

Hey, Helen, you didn't add to the train, but I really like your cinquain anyway. I can relate.
Aloha,
'ilima

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Re: Cinquain

Postby hawkseye » Sun Oct 30, 2011 5:36 pm

Helen - this is beautiful - a tribute to your marriage and life -- and a poem many will embrace! / hawkseye


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