Psychic Phenomena

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Psychic Phenomena

Postby Don Schaeffer » Wed Mar 08, 2017 10:04 am

I managed to
share a dream
last night and
another one
this morning.
It was so fragile
immodest, brief.
.
Have you ever
shared a dream?
The touchpoints are very
narrow. Negotiation
is not possible when
you are in the
midst of it.
You better not
try to go back
it bursts
as delicately
as a bubble.
Don

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