First Day of Autumn

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First Day of Autumn

Postby Don Schaeffer » Tue Sep 26, 2017 6:20 am

The inside of the hollow tree
was larger than the out
it was like a dream
that wrapped everything
in a lumpy package.
.
The machinery of dreaming
is made of silver
that never tarnishes,
smooth gears mesh in
lubricant made of blood.
Don

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