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Don Schaeffer
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Cattish

Postby Don Schaeffer » Mon Dec 04, 2017 7:18 am

When she stands
on the small table
behind the door and spots me,
what she says is brief,
with a small
purr in the sound
I can't duplicate.
I hear a declaration
in her greeting.
When she calls me
from the hallway
in the middle of the night.
The sound has an origin
in it. A wanting.
Without nouns,
only a song.
Don

dancuddy
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Re: Cattish

Postby dancuddy » Sat Dec 16, 2017 3:01 pm

Like this.

Don Schaeffer
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Re: Cattish

Postby Don Schaeffer » Sat Dec 16, 2017 3:13 pm

thanks Dan
Don


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